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Chapter Two: A Few Kind Words

The Man Who Praised Too Much

Chapter Two: A Few Kind Words

← Mark Rolandson / The Man Who Praised Too Much

Freddie approached the bench with a broad smile, greeting Charlie as though they were old friends. He complimented his jacket, asked about school and remarked on how much Charlie had grown over the past year. Charlie was pleased by the attention, especially as Freddie rarely seemed interested in speaking to him before.

"You know, Charlie, I've always thought you're one of the most talented lads around here," Freddie said.

Charlie looked up from his sandwich, surprised. "Have you?"

"Absolutely. You've got confidence, intelligence and a real presence about you. I reckon you're destined for something special."

As they spoke, Freddie began asking about Charlie's hobbies and interests. When he discovered that Charlie had recently performed in a school talent show, he seized upon the subject, insisting that he would love to hear Charlie sing. He claimed that people around Pendlebury deserved to hear such a remarkable voice, especially with the community events taking place near Agecroft.

Charlie had never considered himself an exceptional singer, but Freddie's enthusiasm made him wonder whether he had been underestimating himself. The compliments felt genuine, and he found himself wanting to impress the man who seemed so convinced of his abilities.

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Mark Rolandson

About Mark Rolandson

Mark Rolandson writes short fiction set in the towns and suburbs of Greater Manchester. His stories turn on small everyday moments, a compliment, a missed bus, a sandwich left on a bench, and the quiet ways people talk each other into things. The Man Who Praised Too Much is his first story for Tales From A Harrogate Caravan.

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