No Agent or Gatekeeper - Start Publishing Today!

Wait — Your Story Deserves to Be Read

Nervous About Submitting?

You're not alone — most of our writers had never submitted anywhere before us. We publish every writer, every story.

Submit Your Writing
Chapter Four: A Lesson Learned

The Man Who Praised Too Much

Chapter Four: A Lesson Learned

← Mark Rolandson / The Man Who Praised Too Much

Later that afternoon, Charlie sat near the green space by Agecroft Cemetery, replaying the morning's events in his head. He felt embarrassed, not just because he had lost his lunch, but because he had allowed himself to be so easily manipulated.

An older neighbour named Margaret, who had known Charlie since he was a child, noticed his disappointment and stopped to ask what was wrong. Charlie explained everything, from Freddie's unexpected praise to the moment he walked away with the sandwich.

Margaret listened patiently before explaining that compliments were not necessarily a bad thing, but they could sometimes be used to influence people. She reminded Charlie that genuine friendship was built on honesty and respect, not on exaggerated praise designed to get something in return.

Charlie began to understand that his mistake had not been accepting a compliment, but allowing his desire for approval to override his judgement. He realised that he could enjoy being appreciated without feeling the need to prove himself to everyone who offered kind words.

As the afternoon sun settled over Pendlebury, Charlie walked home past the familiar streets near St Augustine's Church. He had lost his lunch, but he had gained something more valuable: the understanding that not everyone who makes you feel important has your best interests at heart.

From that day onwards, Charlie listened carefully to what people said, but paid even closer attention to what they wanted.

← Previous ChapterBack to The Man Who Praised Too Much
⭐ Leave a Google Review
Mark Rolandson

About Mark Rolandson

Mark Rolandson writes short fiction set in the towns and suburbs of Greater Manchester. His stories turn on small everyday moments, a compliment, a missed bus, a sandwich left on a bench, and the quiet ways people talk each other into things. The Man Who Praised Too Much is his first story for Tales From A Harrogate Caravan.

Author Page

Reader Comments

Leave a Comment or a Book Review

We would love to hear your thoughts on this chapter, or even a complete book review.

Keep 100% of Your Book Profits → Watch on YouTube